great idea
the bass is here is awesome, not really smooth, but the composition is great. the guitar comes in nicely, and this would probably be great with some vocals. the only thing that distracts me is the softwar-ish feel. No, the synth near the end is awesome, but maybe the drums and the bass gotta sound more 'natural'. Find some people, and play this live, gonna make a nice piece. keep it up.
har, thanks. I know what you mean about the track sounding digital. I could get some kids to play this song for me, no problem, but getting a decent recording would be tough for us because were on a stiff budget (as in,...no budget at all.) Thanks for the review!
not bad
well, it's not necessarily grunge, might just go for hard rock as well, but its good nontheless. The (slap)bass was not very stable, but I myself ain't that good at playing real life instruments (hopefully will be someday), so I'm not the right person to judge that. Anyways, keep it up.
Here is a little bit of trivia, I played the slap-bass on the same guitar I used to record this song. So I made my guitar sound like a bass. How badass is that? Still, that's probably why it sounded unstable. Thanks for the review though.
nice
the voice in the background is pretty atmospheric. also that shaky electronic sound coming at 1:25 mins is great. and the beat is good. well, keep it up!
thankies
trancy
this fits perfectly in the trance genre, goes for ambient too. would sound nice in a vid game. good job.
Hey, thanks. I just posted this a couple of minutes ago, and I'm excited to see that I have 7 downloads already. Thanks for the feedback.
pretty good
this one is really well composed, you have a great melody going. The sounds could be better for a a perfect score, but I know that with software its very hard to make rock sound like it was played live (I had a similar problem with my 'Could It Be?' track). Any ways, great job. Keep it up.
thanks!!
nice
the ambience is really good here. there are no 'empty spaces' which is good. did you get this from FLStudio? anyways, this would be excellent background music. keep it up, and check out my latest ambient if you want.
thanks man. I'll get to your stuff soon
good
sounds pretty ambient to me. this would be a cool soundtrack, like for some video game. anyways, good job.
Pretty much what I was going for. Thanks for the comment, gives me some inspiration to keep making tracks.
great
very emotional. damn, you've inspired me to make some more ambient myself. will be back with another piece soon :). keep it up.
Yay. I inspired someone. It makes me happy inside. :)
Keep up the good work man your a superior artist to me in every respect.
immersive
that's what i love about ambience, it goes beyond the typical structuring of music. this is really interesting once again. i have one similar piece where i'm saying 'Why is a raven like a writing desk?' (from Alice in Wonderland)reversed, and then using sped up and slowed down samples i make a 'composition'. might post it these days. anyways, i'm happy to know that someone here values different methods of expression. keep posting stuff :)!
Thanks man. Your far to kind to me. I'd love to hear this composition of your's i bet its so awsome i would die and be eaten by a undead sheep. Anyways. Thanks man your and awsome artist. Keep up the good work.
cool!
hey this sounds really interesting, I love everything about it. how did you make this? did you mix separate tracks/sounds or did you really make all of the stuff? anyways its good, i heard some of your other stuff, sounds really distant and calming, exactly how I imagine ambient. keep it up!
ps. thanks for the review.
Ye i recorded all the sounds myself using house hold objects. That is aside from the beatles singing Because.:) Thank you man.
thanks for the reviews and ratings
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